Pre-write
1. Select an experience that you remember well.
2. Think about the lesson you learned from the experience.
3. Write a timeline to put event in chronological order. (think plot diagram)
4. Complete a sensory chart.
5. Answer the 5 W and H question.
First Draft
1. Write skipping lines. (Careful with the margins)
2. Use dialogue to show personality traits of the other characters in the story.
3. Use sensory chart.
FIRST .......HAHA Rene
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Jaime's Post: FIRST .......HAHA Rene
Letters and Spaces: 23
Date posted: 14-6-13
14+6+13=33
23 is not equal to 33
That is not correct, neither is Edward's comment.
Since mine is not technically first, but yours is wrong, my amount of letters doesn't have to match the date posted, but I am first since those are wrong.
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Oh yes: my other first comments dont have to match the date since the rule was posted 1 second before you posted your comment.
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One does not simply beat Rene to being first...
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