I think that Abraham Lincoln was a very wise man. I know that if I would have been there, I would truelly believe what he was saying. I would feel all the liberty of the world coming towards me. If I were a slave, I would KNOW he was the right person for the job.
it is important that he said this speech because know people are proud of the people that fought in the war and are proud of their independance and freedom.
If i would be there when abraham lincoln was saying this speach, i would be so like sentimental and sad abaout the war and the soldiers who died on it.. I will be heart broken for all those families who lost a brother, father, uncle etc.. It was a ver great speach for the U.S to understand what was hapoening on the civil war. I think this was a beautifil speach talking about the crisis in that time.
I would feel the same feeling he felt, the feeling of freedom. If I were there, I would feel the sensation of loyalty to my nation. His words touched my heart, and those words would teach many people different lessons.
Abraham Lincoln was a very determined man. He wants to make his country better, fill with liberty and consideration. He said very wise words by given respect to the soldiers who died in the bettle. He act with a respectfully consideration to everyone that fight. If I was there, hearing the speech I will think that it was perfect. It will made me think about it all the time. All the words he said, and the way he wants to take her country to a better future impacts my life.
I think that many people knew that what he was saying was true , that people should not have died there it. If I was there I would probably know that this war should not have happened because I agree with he said , and i think that was the purpose of the speech Abraham Lincoln; to persuade.
If I would have been there i would feel why we always make war for nothing why we dont sign a treat ment of peace and stop war i feel like we were punished with this frase "Fourscore and seven years ago our fathers brought forth on this continent a new nation , conceived in liberty , and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal".
I think he was very brave. He also wanted to stop slavory. If he could he will stop war. He was very brave .If i have been there I will be astonished about that . I will also feel liberty . He was perfect for the job of stoping slavory.
I think that Abraham Lincoln did a really good job in making this speech. If I were a slave I would be so relieved that someone did something and said something at last. My opinion is that he is a good man.
I think Abraham Lincoln was a really nice man that wanted to stop slavery. He was an old humble man. If I would have been there, I would have feel a lot of freedom and happy for all the slavers and people who have suffer for that.
I think it was a great speech because, if were a slave i would feel free and fight for my rights and they will maybe touch the heart of the people how were doing slavery and they will stop.
I think that abraham Lincon was a very good and honest man, because he make everybody stop the slavery and he afirm that ALL MAN ARE CRETED EQUAL. Lincon was a big heroe, and he was recognize for his speech, that made a big change on earth.
that the people that fought in the civil war will alway be in there hearts because they fought for there goods and to protect there their nation. this people made history when they fought for their rights with their president and they will not perish from their hearts. jose antonio icaza jose miguel berrocal
This speech is dedicated to all the people on the states so they know how it's the war how suffering is and how hard is. He also wants the people to understand the sadness and also to help the nation be together again
My opinion is that he did this in good. He saw that the nation was starting to separate. He stop slavery even thou he was a white man. The impact was serious because it was one of the purposes of the war being stop. He said that alll man are created equal and that's true.
This speech by Abraham Lincoln is very motivational beacause it tells you that segregation should never exist between the black and white people. Also that every single person in the world should have the same rights
Lincoln was a great man because in th Gettysburg Adress he stated that all man were created equal and those who died will always be in their hearts because they fought to fight against slavery and this changed the world beacuse Abraham Lincoln ended slavery.
This speech shows Abraham Lincon did a very good job. I can tell he really cared and that he wanted to make a difference. He wanted everyone to be treated the same and he wanted freedom and people to be treated equally.
It is important and sentimental at the same time because it`s Lincoln talking about the civil war, every person that died in it, how they want freedom and that people must be treated by equal. I think it had made a great impact to every listener in it because they get the feeling and thought Lincoln is trying to pass into everyone. I know from hearing this speech that he was a very honest, good hero in life and that he may have made a huge world change and make people think for others and treat them the same and the way they would like others to treat them.
i think Abraham lincoln was a very intelligent man and he really speaks with his heart because of the people that lost their life fighting for equality. We are really gonna remember these people as heroes and their shouldnt be any descrimination cause god created us very alike. -Jose Ramon.Alberto
Lincoln's words were very well chosen and profound. He shows that he knows what is happening, and he will not ignore it. He says he will never forget the death of his troops, and he shows that he is a president that really cares and protects his country. That is why he is my favorite president.
He says that people will probably forget his words, but we still remember. We, too, will never forget the brave people who battled in that war.
Of the people, by the people, for the people FREEDOM
i think that Abraham Lincoln is very wise. He is a defender of liberty, justice and the same time he thinks good for him as well as for the rest of the world. For him to write such an inspirational thing like this, he should´ve been in a lot of pain in very hard times, in a war. By this writing he shows he is brave, and he would not rest until finding justice and happiness for everyone.
I think that Lincoln's speech was very important for us to open our eyes and really see what was happening. My opinion is that Lincoln really wanted to change America and make it a better place for all of us. He also wanted to tell us that we need to fight that we cannot give up.
Abraham Lincon was a very intelligent man.He said what he thought people should do and what was right for them. He expressed his feelings and that is great.
If a was there when Abraham Lincon said that speech i would realise what an horrible nation we have been.I would stop and think of all those family that lost their love ones because they were fitting for justice. I know that the reason they were fighting was because of the slaves but there is not need to kill. Abraham Lincon was a man that was very honest also he would stand alone before millions for a person that needed help. I admired him.
Lincoln's word were very true. With this words we could see that he now all the things that are happening to the slaves. I feel very sad for that people that lost a familiar. This speech probably touch the hards of many people.
I think that the speech made all the people that were doing slavery, made them realize that that was the wrong thing to do. He showed us that he really cared about all the wars that were happening in his country and he was really aware of what was happening -DROPE AND CRISTINA
I think that Abraham Lincoln was a very wise man. I know that if I would have been there, I would truelly believe what he was saying. I would feel all the liberty of the world coming towards me. If I were a slave, I would KNOW he was the right person for the job.
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ReplyDeleteMy opinion: I think that the importance of the speech is that it makes people realize that they were doing the wrong thing by doing slavery.
ReplyDeleteIf i would be there when abraham lincoln was saying this speach, i would be so like sentimental and sad abaout the war and the soldiers who died on it.. I will be heart broken for all those families who lost a brother, father, uncle etc.. It was a ver great speach for the U.S to understand what was hapoening on the civil war. I think this was a beautifil speach talking about the crisis in that time.
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DeleteI would feel the same feeling he felt, the feeling of freedom. If I were there, I would feel the sensation of loyalty to my nation. His words touched my heart, and those words would teach many people different lessons.
ReplyDeleteAbraham Lincoln was a very determined man. He wants to make his country better, fill with liberty and consideration. He said very wise words by given respect to the soldiers who died in the bettle. He act with a respectfully consideration to everyone that fight. If I was there, hearing the speech I will think that it was perfect. It will made me think about it all the time. All the words he said, and the way he wants to take her country to a better future impacts my life.
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DeleteI think that many people knew that what he was saying was true , that people should not have died there it. If I was there I would probably know that this war should not have happened because I agree with he said , and i think that was the purpose of the speech Abraham Lincoln; to persuade.
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If I would have been there i would feel why we always make war for nothing why we dont sign a treat ment of peace and stop war i feel like we were punished with this frase "Fourscore and seven years ago our fathers brought forth on this continent a new nation , conceived in liberty , and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal".
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DeleteI think he was very brave. He also wanted to stop slavory. If he could he will stop war. He was very brave .If i have been there I will be astonished about that . I will also feel liberty . He was perfect for the job of stoping slavory.
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DeleteI think that Abraham Lincoln did a really good job in making this speech. If I were a slave I would be so relieved that someone did something and said something at last. My opinion is that he is a good man.
ReplyDeleteI think Abraham Lincoln was a really nice man that wanted to stop slavery. He was an old humble man. If I would have been there, I would have feel a lot of freedom and happy for all the slavers and people who have suffer for that.
ReplyDeleteI think it was a great speech because, if were a slave i would feel free and fight for my rights and they will maybe touch the heart of the people how were doing slavery and they will stop.
ReplyDeleteI think that abraham Lincon was a very good and honest man, because he make everybody stop the slavery and he afirm that ALL MAN ARE CRETED EQUAL. Lincon was a big heroe, and he was recognize for his speech, that made a big change on earth.
ReplyDeletethat the people that fought in the civil war will alway be in there hearts because they fought for there goods and to protect there their nation. this people made history when they fought for their rights with their president and they will not perish from their hearts.
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this speach by president lincoln shows how he really cared about making the us a better place by figthing for the rights they need and diserve
ReplyDeleteThis speech is dedicated to all the people on the states so they know how it's the war how suffering is and how hard is. He also wants the people to understand the sadness and also to help the nation be together again
ReplyDeleteMy opinion is that he did this in good. He saw that the nation was starting to separate. He stop slavery even thou he was a white man. The impact was serious because it was one of the purposes of the war being stop. He said that alll man are created equal and that's true.
ReplyDeleteThis speech by Abraham Lincoln is very motivational beacause it tells you that segregation should never exist between the black and white people. Also that every single person in the world should have the same rights
ReplyDeleteLincoln was a great man because in th Gettysburg Adress he stated that all man were created equal and those who died will always be in their hearts because they fought to fight against slavery and this changed the world beacuse Abraham Lincoln ended slavery.
ReplyDeleteThis speech shows Abraham Lincon did a very good job. I can tell he really cared and that he wanted to make a difference. He wanted everyone to be treated the same and he wanted freedom and people to be treated equally.
ReplyDeleteIt is important and sentimental at the same time because it`s Lincoln talking about the civil war, every person that died in it, how they want freedom and that people must be treated by equal. I think it had made a great impact to every listener in it because they get the feeling and thought Lincoln is trying to pass into everyone. I know from hearing this speech that he was a very honest, good hero in life and that he may have made a huge world change and make people think for others and treat them the same and the way they would like others to treat them.
ReplyDeleteI think that president lincoln meant that they fight for freedom and to end slavery from the United States to make it a better country
ReplyDeletei think Abraham lincoln was a very intelligent man and he really speaks with his heart because of the people that lost their life fighting for equality. We are really gonna remember these people as heroes and their shouldnt be any descrimination cause god created us very alike. -Jose Ramon.Alberto
ReplyDeleteLincoln's words were very well chosen and profound. He shows that he knows what is happening, and he will not ignore it. He says he will never forget the death of his troops, and he shows that he is a president that really cares and protects his country. That is why he is my favorite president.
ReplyDeleteHe says that people will probably forget his words, but we still remember. We, too, will never forget the brave people who battled in that war.
Of the people, by the people, for the people FREEDOM
i think that Abraham Lincoln is very wise. He is a defender of liberty, justice and the same time he thinks good for him as well as for the rest of the world. For him to write such an inspirational thing like this, he should´ve been in a lot of pain in very hard times, in a war. By this writing he shows he is brave, and he would not rest until finding justice and happiness for everyone.
ReplyDeleteLincoln showed us that he really cared of al the wars and wanted to make his country a better place.
ReplyDeleteI think that Lincoln's speech was very important for us to open our eyes and really see what was happening. My opinion is that Lincoln really wanted to change America and make it a better place for all of us. He also wanted to tell us that we need to fight that we cannot give up.
ReplyDeleteI think Abraham Lincoln was a great man. He stopped the slavery which that made him a brave man. He fought for the rights of black people
ReplyDeleteAbraham Lincon was a very intelligent man.He said what he thought people should do and what was right for them. He expressed his feelings and that is great.
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If a was there when Abraham Lincon said that speech i would realise what an horrible nation we have been.I would stop and think of all those family that lost their love ones because they were fitting for justice. I know that the reason they were fighting was because of the slaves but there is not need to kill. Abraham Lincon was a man that was very honest also he would stand alone before millions for a person that needed help. I admired him.
ReplyDeleteLincoln's word were very true. With this words we could see that he now all the things that are happening to the slaves.
ReplyDeleteI feel very sad for that people that lost a familiar.
This speech probably touch the hards of many people.
He says what he thing things should be and how he fight for his country
ReplyDeletelincon was a very honorable person he showed his awsome ides of how to thank the people ho fought in the war.
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ReplyDeleteIf I were in the time of the civil war because he told that all men are created the same and that's real!!
I think that the speech made all the people that were doing slavery, made them realize that that was the wrong thing to do. He showed us that he really cared about all the wars that were happening in his country and he was really aware of what was happening -DROPE AND CRISTINA
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